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Casual Fashion

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I wanted to be a fashion designer since then. Now I'd like to present to you one of my recently drawn fashion designs.
I really hope you all like them!

Any criticism? :)
PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT IT!
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I'd appreciate it if you could favourite, comment, and maybe WATCH me!
Thank you very much for viewing!


Also check out Gowns by Shawneigh:
shawneigh.deviantart.com/art/G…

TOOLS I USED:
Mechanical Pencil,
Narrow Rubber Eraser,
Adobe Photoshop CS2 (for coloring)

Artwork by Shawneigh [10 years old]
Image size
1536x2048px 976.38 KB
Make
EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Model
KODAK C663 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
Shutter Speed
1/39 second
Aperture
F/2.7
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jun 2, 2012, 12:26:25 PM
© 2012 - 2024 Lawleighette
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ColonelMarksman's avatar
I stared at this picture for a really long time to find something to critique. These designs are inspirational and very well thought-out. I think a variety of colors on the circular pattern at left could be brighter, but that would depend on the accessories and hair.

The only thing I can think of, fashion-wise, is that the bottom end of the jacket on the model on the right. It hugs the wearer unlike the rest of the clothing items which have flared cuffs with that standing collar tied in with the trim on the shirt. Maybe you thought otherwise (which is fine, the detail is really small) so it was just my opinion that the jacket should come down to the hips and flare out a bit as well.